Hallo!
I am Lee Tsz Yan.
My friend call me Yan.
I am fourteen year old.
I live in Ma On Shan.
I like sleeping and shopping.
I like eating ice-cream and chocolate.
I am capricious.
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Defender90
- 2007-10-01 @ 08:09:16 pm
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Hello!
I am Lee Tsz Yan.
My friends call me Yan.
I am fourteen years old.
I live in Ma On Shan.
I like sleeping and shopping.
I like eating ice-cream and chocolates.
I am capricious.
Well-done but
can you spot how many grammatical errors you made?
Keep it up and you will be rewarded one day.